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    dots Submission Name: Eternally yours......dots
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    Author: krimzon_ghozt
    ASL Info:    21/m/ca
    Elite Ratio:    0.35 - 0/1/5
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/I am dead inside
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    dotsEternally yours......dots
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    Some feel I don't exist
    Never believing in what they see
    Some feel that I am not fair
    I leave no time for repentance

    losing all avail

    Some feel I bare the curse of man
    A misguided philosophy
    Some feel I kill for fun
    I kill for life

    I can't escape what noones left for me
    I can't deny the lack of justification
    Need time to think need time to think
    Need to spill blood so I can drink
    Take away they give
    I feel I'm dead yet still I live

    They don't know I'm mortal
    They don't know themselves
    They don't know I'm eternal

    Eternal




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