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    dots Submission Name: The Dreamdots
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    Author: DrkVelvet
    ASL Info:    21/ Female
    Elite Ratio:    1.23 - 1/5/17
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 71
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 496



    Description:
       The one true love of her life, she finds only in her dreams.


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    dotsThe Dreamdots
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    All my life,
    I've dreamed of you.
    Now you're here,
    Could this be true?
    My eyes are blurry,
    I can't see.
    Are you really,
    Here with me?
    The warmth of your body,
    The feel of your skin.
    I can feel,
    That rush again.
    Stars are shining,
    In the sky.
    I wake up,
    You're out my mind.
    I can't wait,
    To sleep my friend.
    So we can be,
    Together again.




    Submitted on 2006-04-30 12:02:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Awww so cute. I love it. It sux that she can only be with her true love in her dreams. I have that sometimes,but I think its just a longing of my soul to find its counterpart. Anyways I'm just ranting.
    You're out of my mind
    That is the only line that has a problem but other than that I love it.
    Katana
    | Posted on 2006-05-01 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ]



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