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    dots Submission Name: Preacher preach, but don’t condemndots
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    Author: ira
    ASL Info:    20.f.ca
    Elite Ratio:    3.2 - 234/267/172
    Words: 388
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
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       i dont know, i think about the state of religion sometimes, and today i was just wondering how many preacher/pastors/monks actualy believe anymore? i mean i know the ones i do look like they feel the word as if God stood before them, but really whatever happened to people going out and looking for their own path to God? instead of listening to a man/women who may not believe themselves


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    dotsPreacher preach, but don’t condemndots
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    Waiting in euphoria
    waiting for your speech,
    talent oh so profound
    you’ve given many a reason to believe
    so you stand upon your altar oh so proud.
    Buried in your book.
    Buried by the sound,
    you see witches dancing in the night,
    moon lite beauties full of devilish pride.
    Waiting for your side effects, damnation’s you will never forget,
    tell me more about your hell,
    I’m going or so you say.
    Ask him for forgiveness God will grant the way.
    Standing by your altar taking in your bread,
    the gift of our last savior, praying till his end.
    Waiting in euphoria,
    as if this priest would care,
    dancing with the witches he’ll see them every where
    taking in the wine,
    purify my body,
    I truly do believe the lies are not with me.
    He stands upon the altar preaching all your sins,
    governing your questions.
    Do you actually believe your God did live?
    Never mind the question your preachers speaking now,
    he speaks so many perfect lines,
    all God given none from his mind,
    using the book as a shield,
    the altar as his wall,
    can you believe him?
    How can you believe him? You don’t know what he’s never felt.
    what happened to the experience,
    waiting in euphoria,
    I’ll find my faith that way,
    waiting in your presence
    how can you stand so tall.
    Oh mighty pastor,
    giver of the word,
    when’s the last time you’ve felt him?
    When’s the last time you’ve heard?
    How many times you’ve damned us
    I think its kind of absurd
    you stand in front of them,
    every morning the same time,
    making them believe, were do you get the right?
    You don’t know what God is,
    you don’t know the faith,
    you preach to me about damnation.
    About my fallen faith,
    but how would you know when you’ve never
    felt my Gods presence?
    Waiting in euphoria
    waiting with my belief,
    I’ll sit and hear you out,
    but without Gods touch you’ll never understand,
    why your bull shit words don’t stand by the faith
    its all a bunch of lines,
    God forgive you for leading so blind,
    God forgive you for making up other mind’s.
    God forgive you preacher
    for taking up his time.













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      I like how it was worded. The way you started and the way you ended were marvelous! i've never had a preacher in my church, so i've never actually been preached to. the congragation speaks...but it seems it would be frustrating to be lead by someone whom you're not sure is living right. thanks for voicing these emotions!
    | Posted on 2007-01-20 00:00:00 | by Morticus | [ Reply to This ]
      Beautifully exquisite.....
    You have explained my personal view profoundly

    Well done

    Love it.
    | Posted on 2007-01-17 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]
      Hmmm... it's a good write, I like how you put your feelings so clearly on the page and were able to question at the same time.
    I believe for pastors that are truly saved by the grace of God (yes, I believe there are unsaved pastors) it is a constant struggle just like in a normal child of God's life. But, I believe that even if the pastor does fall away for a while, God will always bring him back. Just my thoughts.
    Good job!
    | Posted on 2006-04-30 00:00:00 | by Aelfled | [ Reply to This ]



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