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Author: hollowhungryeye
ASL Info:    15/F/Spain
Elite Ratio:    0.8 - 0 /1 /9
Words: 167
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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Turn Around
Get away
I Feel alone
Don't wanna stay
Feel so different
So Far apart
It hurts so bad
I need a fresh start
Been alone so long
This makes me scared
So much is wrong
Nothing goes right
So many promises
When all I've got is might
I may do this I might do that
It hurts me so much
Cause i dont want you to see
whats deep inside,
my heart,
in me.
breaking down
losing faith
I dont wanna go
go back to that place
the place so dark
so dank
so low
i don't wanna be here
just leave me alone
its breaking my heart
cause you dont see me
but i dont know what i should do.
wait it out
lose it now
i dunno how to choose
what to do
all i know
is that i love you
and that wont change
itll never stop
ill just stop letting it show
and ill try and move on.

Submitted on 2006-04-30 20:06:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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