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Author: hollowhungryeye
ASL Info:    15/F/Spain
Elite Ratio:    0.8 - 0 /1 /9
Words: 477
Class/Type: Poetry /Fuck it all
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Here i am writing out my feelings
nothing but pain sorrow and hate
i guess thats just the way life is
it throws you out, casts you away
i hate that you aren't really seeing
what is right there in your face
if you would look you would see
you'll see that pain within me
the feeling of dislike and of being unwanted
lonely shattered and broken
always waiting for my chance
and having it crash in front of me
i need a reason to live for
all i have is me
there is nothing you can say
to make everything ok
its what you did that is hurting you
you can blame it on me but you know you did it
i hate that i cant hurt you
the way you hurt me
when you left me with my miseary
but you cant hurt me again cause i am gone
but i am sitting here and i feel like i am a burden on the world
like i am alone not needed
its like i can't think of anything but my pain
and i just want to end it
do myself in
its like i cant see anything
and i am lost within me
i am drowning in my sorrow
choking on the pain
killing me slowly
but it all feels the same
the smile that you think is so real
if you looked past it you could see how i feel
but you dont cause you wont understand
what i am going through
and you dont care cause i am not important to you
im just another face in the crowd
nothing special or diffrent
but to me i have everything
i am what i need
you were my pain
the dieses that is killing me
the pain and the agnoy is you
you are my anger
my desprate plee for help you cant see
your lies are strangling me
and i am slipping quickly
would you care if i died today?
would you notice i was gone?
but i know the answer but im hoping for a diffrent one
take me away
i dont want you to be with me
i wanna get out
out of the mold
out to somewhere new
but i cant do it
i cant be free
youre holding me down
keeping me away from my possiblitys
i know i am worth something
but you make that hard to believe
i hate that you make me hate myself
but what can i do
i cant change you
but i wish i could
nothing makes sense to me
and what i did is killing me
what i once loved i now hate
but nothing is right
nothing is good
im left in the dark
no sign of returning
i am alone.

Submitted on 2006-04-30 20:07:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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