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And she marks the calendar With her special pink pen A tick for passed A cross for failure From one day To the next She can look But never touch It’s like a trophy Almost an award When she looks at the scales And she’s 3 kilos lighter But 3 isn’t just enough, It’s like a habit An addiction Not to eat Starves herself to the bone People know but say nothing It’s like walking past A skeleton in motion The mirror image To her reflects the worst An image Of what she is not The desired figure Of what she wants to be She still doesn’t realize That’s who she once was I look at her from afar And wonder why And how Someone could be that way And one day I turn to the mirror And realize the girl I always see The girl I couldn’t Ever understand I couldn’t help… Was the girl me |
I don't know...this felt...DESCRIPTIVE to me...does that make sense? Not a lot of emotion in it for such an intense topic. Like the cover of a book vs reading it...there is so much more underneath that needs to be brought out.| Posted on 2006-05-01 00:00:00 | by Emerging Soul | [ Reply to This ] | Very nice! Another good write. | Anorexia well captured, including the way people around SEE but don't DO anything. All too often one's self image is SO very different from how others percieve you. I thought the TITLE was very apt and the reflective (no pun intended) hook at the end of the last verse, thought provoking. Well done, Regards, Psyve | Posted on 2006-05-01 00:00:00 | by Psyve | [ Reply to This ] | |