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    dots Submission Name: What is love?dots
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    Author: ellesmera
    ASL Info:    18. Female. England
    Elite Ratio:    1.6 - 43/263/115
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsWhat is love?dots
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    What is love?
    If the one you want,
    Doesnt know it?
    What is love?
    If the one that likes you,
    Doesnt show it?
    Why do we always fall for the same trap?
    why do i?
    Never see it coming,
    round the bend,
    What is love?
    the laughing of two friends over a movie they just saw?
    I don't think so,
    Is it love,
    when two people kiss and say they wanna stay,
    forever,
    together?
    i have sinking feeling,
    that thats; not love.
    Is love a squirmy feeling you get inside?
    Is it what turns your tounge inside out?
    is it the giggle, of a lover?
    what is a lover?
    what is love?




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    ||| Comments |||
      In my opinion, love is that feeling when someone becomes your everything, your favorite reason to get out of bed everyday. Some person said "Love is the condition in which the happiness of another is essential to your own." I believe it but I also believe in the over-the-fence, out-of-the-ballpark, shoot-for-the-stars kinda love sooo maybe it's only me. If I've ever known love than it's the most amazing thing in the world if requited. If I haven't, I don't want to.
    | Posted on 2006-11-16 00:00:00 | by MyWorld | [ Reply to This ]
      "what is love, baby don't hurt me, baby don't hurt me, no more..." - that song umped into my head when i saw the tittle...i like this the whole concept of what we've been told is love is not...
    | Posted on 2006-05-01 00:00:00 | by suicidalacts72 | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this. it seems uncertain the point ur trying to get across cuz the flow is mixed but other than that it is really good and i liked how the line "what is love?" kept falling into the poem somewhere. it was an interesting part that attracted me so much. i like this very much and its really good in my eyes. its a fav. k. bye.
    an [x] to an {oh}
    <3 Kel
    | Posted on 2006-05-01 00:00:00 | by bleedinbabygrl8 | [ Reply to This ]


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