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I Thought about you today

Author: boo boo
ASL Info:    18/f/mi
Elite Ratio:    2.74 - 108 /104 /60
Words: 83
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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I Thought about you today

I thought about you today
and carved a heart upon my palm
It's deep enough to remind me that it belongs to you alone.
I thought about your touch today
and branded your name on every inch of my body
I thought about your kiss today
and painted my lips a strawberry red
so luscious and full
I thought about your strong hands today
and I painted my nails a bright color.
for the happiness you bring is a light inside of me.

Submitted on 2006-05-01 10:27:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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