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    dots Submission Name: I Thought about you todaydots
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    Author: boo boo
    ASL Info:    18/f/mi
    Elite Ratio:    2.74 - 108/104/60
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsI Thought about you todaydots
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    I thought about you today
    and carved a heart upon my palm
    It's deep enough to remind me that it belongs to you alone.
    I thought about your touch today
    and branded your name on every inch of my body
    I thought about your kiss today
    and painted my lips a strawberry red
    so luscious and full
    I thought about your strong hands today
    and I painted my nails a bright color.
    for the happiness you bring is a light inside of me.




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