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    dots Submission Name: a emcee's dreamdots
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    Author: elohimswork
    ASL Info:    30/M/Chi
    Elite Ratio:    4.54 - 76/96/39
    Words: 216
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 144
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1754



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    dotsa emcee's dreamdots
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    Invision with me
    the poetic beauty of a
    lyrical emcee cemetery...

    were the wind blows
    cold in honor
    of there flows...

    amazed...

    do the ears
    & eye's deceive.

    robbins
    chirping rhymes,
    bee's buzzin
    mississippi blues.

    vinyl 4...flowers.
    mary jane 4 grass
    beneath my feet.

    brushes 4 beats.

    on every...
    ivory marble headstone.
    is a iced out mic.
    a herringbone pen
    an amber pad...
    with a...
    stupid crazy phat medallion
    & the...crest
    " in lyrics we trust...
    4 the luv...we bust".
    along the circumfrence.

    here...
    were I stand...
    many styles rest.
    I stand
    impressed & blessed
    blessed & impressed.
    "Ra's" lyte on my face
    the "Teacha's" book
    in my hand...

    but...
    low an behold.
    out the corner
    of my creative cornea.
    I spot
    rows & rows
    of black fist peace sign picks
    with the metalic teeth
    buried onyl partially deep.
    4 every...
    underground emcee
    thats gone unknown.

    peace...
    2 The Lords.

    & precious is
    this "Quiet Storm"...

    so...
    when my flesh is no more
    never mourn.
    find a plot within this lot
    & bury me...
    4 this is...trully
    the valley of the kings
    resting on
    hollow
    ground...



    4 fingers an a pen poetry...




    Submitted on 2006-05-01 18:19:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      man this was the [censored]. i am definitely a hip hop addict. but i only listen to the good [censored]. i love the underground rappers cuz these mainstream dudes are just lame, no talent actors. i liked the line "in lyrics we trust". this was ill. and it's definitely going on my fave list
    | Posted on 2006-05-23 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      I may be wrong....but I read this early yesterday and it seems different today! Did you add to it? LOL! If not, sorry....if so, I like it.

    This was a different scope of you then I have seen before. You took a different topic on this one and I am liking what I see!

    So many styles that no longer exist....so many mic's put to rest.....even great lyricists put to rest.

    I think that these people deserve the credits. They have spoken of a while what many don't want heard. They have brought many issues to life, and made many people listen.

    You gave this an urban beauty. It fits the hip hop trend.....yet the poetic side of it adds to the pleasure.

    This piece, with your mentality, flawless!

    Much love,

    Li Li
    | Posted on 2006-05-03 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]



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