i really liked this. reminded me of myself kind of. haha. you know you're narcissistic when. its actually kinda similar to the poem that i JUST posted. just in the way that they both have the word secrets in them... but, back to business, i really enjoyed this, kind of reminded me of a death cab song.
(oh, and a personal preferences of mine is just spelling out cause rather than cuz, etc. i just think it takes away from the beauty of the piece.)