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    dots Submission Name: Driving me crazydots
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    Author: Kueen_Emerald
    ASL Info:    17/f
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 130/160/57
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       This is something that i just thought of off the top of my head.. lol


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    dotsDriving me crazydots
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    From your stupid hair
    To the clothes you wear
    I donít know why I stick around
    You drive me crazy
    In the worst of ways
    Pulling out my hair
    Then trying not laugh at
    Your stupid jokes
    Spinning around
    In circles
    Remember last year
    For Valentines Day
    What you got me
    You forgot
    So it was half a chocolate bar
    And a rose from my garden
    Thatís the best thing
    Thatís ever happen to me
    All the words you say
    I know are true
    I canít stand to be
    With out you




    Submitted on 2006-05-02 19:34:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      without you life and words are not true without you life on a green earth just be blue
    without you dull nights would ever last and sleepness never past

    nice poem a fav peace
    | Posted on 2006-05-02 00:00:00 | by dudethis | [ Reply to This ]


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