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    Author: melancholymaid
    ASL Info:    24/female/Tennessee
    Elite Ratio:    3.64 - 112/136/34
    Words: 45
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
    Total Views: 1073
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    Bytes: 292



    Description:
       I don't know. I just made it up when I posted it. It's more of an expression of what I feel. It's just a journal-type of poem.


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    Sweet man child,
    Come back to the place of
    Lust and
    Starved Love
    I simply cannot live on dreams and memories

    I need your nights of
    Madness
    and
    Drugged sleep

    I need to sleep beside of you
    Forever




    Submitted on 2006-05-02 19:37:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Sometimes we need to get these feelings out and that is the beauty of expression - it need not follow a formula; just a feeling! Sounds like a lonely piece and I hope you forever man comes back to ease your sleep.

    love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
    tif
    | Posted on 2008-03-04 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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