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    dots Submission Name: My Cesar's Palacedots
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    Author: K-Beezy
    ASL Info:    20/Male/Columbia, S.C.
    Elite Ratio:    3.07 - 46/81/27
    Words: 389
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 960
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    Description:
       I've spent a lot of time in Atlanta, Georgia this year. This is one of the writing I did while sitting on the front porch. I kept thinking about "J-Reezy" so I wrote something up. The name 'Cesar' is actually his middle name, and I decided to use it in the sense it was the casino "Ceasar's Palace." This one is actually one I like a lot, so.. Yeah.
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    dotsMy Cesar's Palacedots
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    When I think about all the love, you've given to me...
    it brings tears to my eyes, for a love so sweet.
    Our love is unbreakable, and will never part...
    and no matter what the distance is, you're always in my heart.

    As I lay my head down to sleep at night...
    you're the last thing I see within my sight.
    I get sad every time I roll to my right...
    and see you aren't there, and I stay strong with all my might.

    But each morning when I get up, I long to hear your voice...
    and your sweet soft accent - my most favorite noise.
    I always see your smile, that brings me so much joy...
    and I keep it close to my heart, like a child's precious toy.

    You're always in my thoughts - always in my eyes...
    Always in my soul, and in every grateful tear I cry.
    Your love definetly sends me hundreds of magical rays...
    And fervent thoughts of you always fill & uplift my days.

    Thank you for your motivation... thank you for the inspiration...
    thank you for the recipricated love which is no exaggeration.
    Thank you for being my boy... thank you for being my friend...
    Thank you for our new love, that shows no signs of an end.

    My Love will stay the same... My love will always remain...
    My love will continue to be with you, else I'd go insane.
    My Love is All For You... hope your love is for me, too...
    Our love will never end, and that's the fuckin' truth.

    My Love is always there... my love will always care...
    From Illinois, Japan, to South Carolina, you'll always be right there.
    So here's to the start... of our love that'll never part...
    I pray that you'll cherish me, and always keep me in your heart.


    Kevin "Beezy Bone" Entzminger Jr
    April 5th, 2006
    Atlanta, Georgia

    This poem is dedicated to my boy, J.R.:
    I love you... I miss you... and I thank God that he blessed me with you. For us, baby. . . For us! ! !




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    to someone who doesn't feel the same, it may be clichéd and boring... but I understand completely. You know, even though everyone seems to be in love... it's more like, everyone seems to be falling apart and breaking up and... it's just so heartwarming to remember that there are people out there with strong emotional connections ^_^

    My favorite lines: Thank you for your motivation... thank you for the inspiration...
    thank you for the recipricated love which is no exaggeration.

    :DDD I loved it. <3! ~Cora Windover
    | Posted on 2006-05-03 00:00:00 | by Cora Windover | [ Reply to This ]


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