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    dots Submission Name: Morbid Conclusiondots
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    Author: Catalist
    ASL Info:    27/M/MN
    Elite Ratio:    5.05 - 20/18/10
    Words: 214
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
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       An unusual [I think] look at life and death ©CDH


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    Fill your life with joy, share your self, love others and let others love you... But be prepared for each gain to become loss, for each ounce of joy and love that you experienced or created in your life to become the worst pain experienceable for you and your loved ones - if the reaper comes unbidden to you or to them...

    Or, let the world fill your life with lonliness, with sorrow... Avoid loving anyone, avoid letting anyone love you that you wouldn't want to hurt by dieing... Then when death comes, it is with gift: the gift of release, of relief. The moment that most humans dread above all will be salvation to you, your final relaxation, your inevitable finishing success...

    Do you live to die or die to live? Do you believe or know that there is or isn't a difference? Do you fight without really knowing what your fight is for? Do you anticipate an ultimate equalization?

    Each day I die for you, child, because I do not want you to grieve when I must leave you for real. Forgive me that I do not share this life with you, for I was born into this loveless undeath.




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