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    dots Submission Name: The definition of lovedots
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    Author: soaring eyes
    ASL Info:    17/f/ga
    Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 18/30/19
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThe definition of lovedots
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    Love is not Jealousy,
    love is not Guilt, love is not like,
    for love is real.
    Love means you would never lie to that person and that you would not only have trust, but that you trust that person,
    you respect them and that you would never harm them,
    and you would never bring harm to them.
    Love is communication and many other things in life.
    Love is not a job or a burden; love is a responsibility.
    so don't tell me you love me if you don't know my definition of love.




    Submitted on 2006-05-03 08:55:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      damm. this was cool as hell. i love the way u broke it down like this. i've never heard it explained in such simple terms. i liked the last line a lot. it shows ur independence as well as raps up the poem quite nicely
    | Posted on 2006-05-22 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a good definition of love. I think you have a fine understanding of what love is and what is means. Unfortunately, in today's world, it seems so much has changed and love isnt something so pure as it once was. People tend to take commitments lightly and use the word love all too freely, without even knowing if they really feel that way. But when you do find it, it is the most wonderful thing, just as you have described here. This is a very nice write and I agree with your definition. Take care.

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2006-05-16 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      Your definition of love is really good. Real true love is the single most powerfull emotion and that is why love can make a life complete. or cause a heart to break in two.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2006-05-15 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice definition... sounds like someone has been hurt as of lately and someone is trying to make it very obvious how they feel about it... it sucked... always sucks when you end up hurt and all torn up because of love... very painful indeed... all you can do is look ahead and try not to remember because the more you remember the more pain you will feel... so do not tell me you love me if you do not know the definition of it... Nice words

    Jose J. Ortiz aka Josyman
    | Posted on 2006-05-07 00:00:00 | by josymanthegreat | [ Reply to This ]


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