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    dots Submission Name: The Fighting Soldierdots
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    Author: cbgurl413
    ASL Info:    15/F/RI
    Elite Ratio:    1.86 - 23/22/24
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsThe Fighting Soldierdots
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    6/16/05

    A like, a love, a who know's
    A wonder, a life, an untakable phrase
    A scam, a steal, a broken heart
    A dream, a light, a passing goal
    A hobby, a phase, a mix-up
    A fight, a laugh, a life-changing smile
    A support, a breath, a dying soldier
    A feel, a touch, a double take
    A like, a love, a fall-hard




    Submitted on 2006-05-03 18:58:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      crystal this is so good.it made me so sad and it made me feel for you.there was nothing that i would change.

    xXo.jen
    | Posted on 2006-05-03 00:00:00 | by DontLetGo421 | [ Reply to This ]


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