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    dots Submission Name: Belldots
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    Author: Acid
    ASL Info:    17/M/Newport, WA
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 103/159/76
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 677
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       Thank you Poe, not just the man, or the band, but thank you.


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    dotsBelldots
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    As all the singers sung,
    The bell without a tounge,
    So the bell has rung,

    Listen, how it swells,
    And so how it dwells,
    Listen to it gloat,
    In a golden note,

    Listen to it well,
    So it may tell,
    Of the glee that may impel,
    In throat of toungless bell.




    Submitted on 2006-05-04 15:44:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was cool, very Poe like with the rhyme scheme and all. I liked it.

    There was nothing really wrong with this piece, it was good.


    Lia
    | Posted on 2006-05-26 00:00:00 | by Glassy Eyed | [ Reply to This ]


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