Honey!!!!!!! You did it up Oh my goodness I know exactly how you feel, Girl that junk is not fair it makes you look back and think man. He's gone. Wonderful, no correction beautifully written poem ~Rene'~
awww that sux. the poem was good . the situation sucked. so ur finally ready to be with'this guy and he's nowhere to be found. that's awful. this is going on my fave. it's so simple but so easy to relate to.
i really liked that third line the most it was just nice to read
the second part well second line did not read very smoothly i think you could probly change around a few words
and the ending first line i think its kinda repetive maybe? i am not sure but i think that the ending is line is also a little out of place but it really puts a nice twist on to the whole thing
"I realized too late that I love you Now it's me longing to be with you"
I love that part. And so many times, you see a friend and you think of that person as just a friend, not knowing that sometimes, they may love you. And when youo finally do find out, it's too late, they already moved on, and now you are the person, sitting and waiting for the other person to love you back. ok, im done.
Submission Name: I realized too Late
