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Author: POETRY
ASL Info:    17/f/az
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Where will love take me?
That is a question I long for
Yet I don’t know what love could be
I know I’m not what it’s made for

They say in time you’ll find the “one”
It’s been 17 years why haven’t I found me the “one”
After so long I am finally done
I am just free to go on
No one has to love me, I’m fine
Just give me a chance to get this tear from my eye.

I have loved and lost
Filled with pain and sorrow
I have paid the extra cost
I am so done with “what if I see him tomorrow”

I may not know much but I know one thing
Love just aint for me

Submitted on 2006-05-04 17:41:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Before I met my current partner, I was single for years, and I was constantly wondering when am I going to meet him? When am I finally going to be happy and settled.

Then someone told me that if I stopped looking for it, it would come and they were right, the minute I stopped looking my partner came into my life and if I had been blinded by wanting it so much, I don't think I would have seen it at all but because I took a step back I was able to see what a beautiful man my partner was and now I am happy.

Great Job though I really liked this
| Posted on 2006-06-01 00:00:00 | by babytinkerbelle | [ Reply to This ]
  I have gotten to this point before. Where I didn't really have any faith in love. I did give up. I planned on just being "in the game" forever.

Things change....even though we tend to give up on certain things....when we least expect it....something happens. No matter what it is. Something happens to give us a self love that makes us content. Whether provided by another or by something.

This was an emotional write. One that I had to sigh while reading. I know your pain girl! I KNOW!

I say we all join E-Harmony and just have fun! LOL!

Great write. Nothing here that needs any kind of improvement!

Much love,

Li Li
| Posted on 2006-05-05 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
  man so many people feel like this it's not even funny. mostly teenagers though. i guess it's just because we're just so emotionally fragile. we give up on love before we've even felt it. i really enjoyed this and i hope u can find the "one" for u soon
| Posted on 2006-05-04 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
  This was a really good one, but it really sucks that you felt that way. I hope that soon you so find the "one" your looking for and all happiest too you. Talk to ya later

| Posted on 2006-06-07 00:00:00 | by Darkestlove | [ Reply to This ]
  Love comes in many shapes and forms. The reason you feel like you won't find him is because you've gone through the ultimate pain the ultimate lonliness. I have been there. You keep telling yourself "I'm fine here without love." Because you don't want to go through it again. Really the choice is up to you. To keep on fighting and find the one for you. When you do it will be the greatest love you could ever feel. Or give up and be afraid of the pain that you will bring you even closer to your goal. "Though I walk through the Valley of Death I shall fear no evil." Keep going
| Posted on 2006-05-04 00:00:00 | by Darkstar9500 | [ Reply to This ]
  There was a time in my life when I felt exactly like this. It was a little under a year ago and I felt like giving up love and such but now I can't really avoid it.

To the write, and this basically took me back and brought back the regret, sorrow and stuff like that. So for me, this was a very moving write, excluding the fact it was about a boy. lol. Hope you're ok and stuff and thanks for posting.

| Posted on 2006-05-14 00:00:00 | by JimweiZERO | [ Reply to This ]

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