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    dots Submission Name: D-LAW 101(D-LAW)dots
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    Author: PROlifik
    ASL Info:    23/m/va
    Elite Ratio:    2.01 - 23/28/21
    Words: 795
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 854
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 4421



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       ya know,just bein +SINceer+ wit it haaaaaaaaaa
    ...the end of sinceer,prolifik and foekuz ????
    stay tuned...
    the new takeover


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    dotsD-LAW 101(D-LAW)dots
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    (chorus-D-LAW)
    the birth of a legend number one in contention so pay attention
    sick of all the bullshit so im here to teach yall a lesson
    when the kid with the new name is mentioned he's causin tension
    im surpressin your guessin i could retire now and live off my pension
    hand picked from a fine selection,number one draft pick and im fine with my selection
    i start the game-you just dressin so stop messin its not me you wanna be testin


    (D-LAW)
    blinded-livin ina world of darkness
    poetic but at the same time heartless i'll stomp your carcass
    i'll deliever a little light as i spark this,let me start this
    straight to your apartments im causing drama in all departments
    you need to learn theres more to your rep then street credit
    for me to go after someone weaker that would just be pathetic
    so you can see why i ignore the many attempts of those trying to knock my character
    id be surprised if my bad reputation minimized figures wise
    damn if i had a nickel for every time -someone criticized id be rich beyond my own demise
    since they put me on my names been on the rise due to lines i've witnessed threw my own eyes
    got em the palm of my hand like i own lives now im resorting back to old lives
    just to create new rhymes,speakin on behalf of the same topic a few times no need for new lines
    crown on my mic as i attempt to rule rhymes,they spit there lies behind closed blinds
    on there alone time- do i condone that crime?if i was to speak on there lies i could fill elite with a thousand rhymes a thousand fuckin times,why is it me you dispise?im just as wrong as them im just tryin to see some sunshine some time
    in it for the same gain look both spittin bout the same game might as well haved used the same name
    now you tryin to bring a cloud of rain just to drown ya pain i just cant allow ya hollow brain to follow my train i aint you- i aint want the fame i just want em to hear whats on my brain ya gotta admit things havent been the same since i came- so how can you possably explain in any way that im lame?im just spittin what i feel inside me-why you gotta dispise me?
    love the skeptics love em for being relentless so in turn in every sentance i guess i'll protect this
    since day one i've just choose to wreck shit now serious with the pen im still wreck-less
    crackin heads i'll leave ya neck-less with nothin to support ya neckless
    with words that remain so infectious its not hard to see why i detect ya next miss
    so while you try and create ya next diss,for the time being i'll just debate on my next hit
    i just cant understand when they say i could never be great,temper off the chain like linkin park "im about ready to break",listin yall got reality at stake you better think of something memorable to create- goin at me aint the way-i been undisputed since ninty eight my limelight is blindin me of late...but wait..i didnt get where im at by bein fake i got populairty off hits i really make- and you can take that to the bank
    so think again when you say i havent earned my rank
    blessed ears with a style thats different gave hope to the underdog and everyone who lived it
    its the end of a new era im done with everyone bein a critic done dealin with everyone attempting to mimic
    im at my limit-its bout time i give it- quick- and show yall what my real style diplicts- this game an what it consists,mentaly sick i just killed PROlifik cuz im sick of it,so quote this cuz you cant demote hits but this is the last time you will ever hear from FoeKuZ(he's DEAAAAAADDDDD!!!!)
    so fuck it you can have the votes tell everyone your livin lavish dope
    for now i'll let everyone live with hope before i cut there rope and choke there throat wit the pen they used on the last diss they wrote,so start lookin for a new way to cope yall are just new wave jokes
    yall are dealin with an old school dude you new school fools just follow rules as i shatter crews
    when the disses spew -at you -i've been known to murder a few im anything but new
    been in the shadows for years makin my statement on pavement i got my belt only thing left is to ingrave it




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    ||| Comments |||
      yeah dude the flow was pretty much kickass. honestly Im not big into rap and stuff but [censored] dude that was pretty sweet.
    | Posted on 2006-05-05 00:00:00 | by the_storyteller | [ Reply to This ]
      im impressed, its the first piece ive read on this site so it all kool, it is fresh and flow were tight, my mate ky a.k.a. secret kisses told me bout your work, so ill be chekin more of it out,

    shae
    | Posted on 2006-05-05 00:00:00 | by shae_indauk | [ Reply to This ]


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