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    dots Submission Name: when we were youngdots
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    Author: shae_indauk
    ASL Info:    20.f.england
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 37/28/11
    Words: 153
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 1128
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       well this is my first write on here, hope u all enjoy, hope ill be hearin from ya,

    shae


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    dotswhen we were youngdots
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    the times that we spent, when we were young,
    annoying mr Crate,
    and boys playing with fake guns,
    how times have changed, since we lived on those sreets, now we write songs and cum up with new beats,
    the drama, the craze, the laughing all day,
    then waiting for your mum to shout and compplain.
    it was all a test, back then when we were young, waiting for the harsh life to start, we knew something had te begun,
    time were hard, sure they were, but they were fun, but to think that times could be even harded for some,
    we treat life so kind, we embraced it, it was ours,
    and times spent playing 1,2,3 in on the street for hours,
    those were the days i will remember, my mums hugs, playing games and laughing together,
    those day when my mum calmed me with song,
    those special days when we were young.




    Submitted on 2006-05-05 06:40:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      oh so ur one of secret kisses's friends huh? well this is a pretty good start. yeah when ur young u don't realize how good u have it. ur usually pretty carefree until u get older and reality comes back to bite u on the ass. good job.
    | Posted on 2006-05-05 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      hey bubz, u finaly decided to take a look then? lol
    told you it aint all corney poetry, i liked this, it touches on where you have com from, but i know you can go deeper, and watch out for typos, ha ha,
    ky
    x x
    | Posted on 2006-05-05 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ]


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