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crap I know, wrote it listening to Nickelback of all things I need to get my hands on some Atreyu or Alice in Chains...Is In FLames anygood?
Yeah um...this is continuous don't stop reading it almost as if it were prose then slow down at the word slow....complex classical musician stuff sry...
Yeah um...this is continuous don't stop reading it almost as if it were prose then slow down at the word slow....complex classical musician stuff sry...
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Time Time is insublime It's not the moving of it no it's the fact that it won't go Fast fast is getting lax not moving quick enough cuz life is getting tough Tough Tough is getting old like getting thrown into the cold Please just keep me warm I don't care if it's not norm Pain Pain is getting lame not enough for me to burst maybe that is why he cursed Control Control is going gone out the door like a whore or a sore out of time out of space out of life out of death Time Time isn insublime It's not the moving of it no it's the fact that it won't go Slow Slow as I begin to be free you'll see it's time I get the respect I expect from you from me from life, but we'll have to wait and see |
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| This is a really powerful write I can easily see this write being matched to music to create one heck of a write You included all the feelings one goes thru in their lifetime which is not an easy task Great Job with this God Bless Ron Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think Thank You Ron | Posted on 2006-05-05 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ] | |
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