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    dots Submission Name: The Monsterdots
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    Author: intoxicated411
    ASL Info:    14/f/earth
    Elite Ratio:    2.38 - 45/60/28
    Words: 232
    Class/Type: Poetry/What you did
    Total Views: 111
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1428



    Description:
       Its about someone i love.
    Im not saying who though.

    hope you like it.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsThe Monsterdots
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    Please tell me your not leaving
    Im sick and im bleeding
    And you could care less
    Now ill end up just like the rest.

    Take a good listen to this song
    Cuz even when im long gone
    This song will live on
    This song is for you
    And everything you put me through.

    Take a good look in the mirror, girl
    Its the only time you can see the monster
    That you regret
    At the end of everyday
    Your winning in a 3-legged relay
    Starring you and the monster
    So go ahead, its your time to shine
    Just you, yourself, and the monster

    But your not surprised
    Cuz you have to share the prize
    With the monster thats inside.

    Take a good listen to this song
    Cuz even when im long gone
    This song will live on
    This song is for you
    And everything you put me through.

    When he gets his prize
    Thats of a rather large size
    He will be done
    And move unto another one.

    Now you watch your life fall away
    And come undone
    The moster has left you
    Watching your lifes bloody re-runs.

    Take a good listen to this song
    Cuz even when im long gone
    This song will live on
    This song is for you
    And everything you put me through.

    Remember i loved you...




    Submitted on 2006-05-05 12:37:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like this piece, it is repeative but that just makes it stronger. joanna
    | Posted on 2006-05-05 00:00:00 | by heartless_ | [ Reply to This ]



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