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    dots Submission Name: Drinking Daydots
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    Author: Katana Ryoko
    ASL Info:    17/F/Cali
    Elite Ratio:    2.86 - 483/428/109
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 990
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    Bytes: 575



    Description:
       It's Cinco de Mayo day and really its just a holiday some beer company promoted to get people to drink. And I am so against that. So here's a funny piece I wrote. It's true even if it's just on the weekends. But anyways enjoy.


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    dotsDrinking Daydots
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    It's May fifth
    Cinco de Mayo
    Or as I call it
    Drinking Day
    So go to a party
    Get a drink or ten
    With some Tequila
    And Vodka in it
    Get so damn wasted
    You wake up
    In someone else's bed
    Wondering where you are
    But it hurts to think
    You wish you hadn't
    Drank that last shot
    Afraid to roll over
    And see the person
    You slept with
    Saying that you'll
    Never do that again
    When you're already
    Planning for tonight




    Submitted on 2006-05-05 13:25:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      yep, yep. alcohol makes people do crazy things. can't say i haven't been a victim, err...maybe victim's not the right word. but, anyway, makes me glad i'm a little bit older now, and more cautious when i AM out. as far as form, the last line doesn't do it for me...for whatever reason--sounds to abrupt to me.

    lauren*
    | Posted on 2006-12-02 00:00:00 | by lauren hamill | [ Reply to This ]
      How did you know about my drinking days? That poem brought back memories. Well what i can remmber. lol I like it i think i will add it.
    | Posted on 2006-11-05 00:00:00 | by drow | [ Reply to This ]
      good. i like it alot. very truthful. hate to say that i do drink. and that cinco de mayo was very fun.. but the part about where u wake up nest to someone is priceless. veryy good thinking.
    good write. its good that u like to have fun.
    <3333
    | Posted on 2006-05-08 00:00:00 | by bleedinbabygrl8 | [ Reply to This ]
      Poems like this remind me of how happy i am that i don't drink. I'm mad that you want to wake up next to someone that u don't remember yet u want to do it again the very next day. Lol. Oh well at least ur having a good time. Keep Writing!!!!!!!!!
    | Posted on 2006-05-05 00:00:00 | by Ensult | [ Reply to This ]
      true, I woke next to a horrible fiqured form that turned out to be my reflexing lol

    true to this what you wrote peace
    | Posted on 2006-05-05 00:00:00 | by dudethis | [ Reply to This ]


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