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    dots Submission Name: Dance around the Flamesdots
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    Author: thor_s avatar
    ASL Info:    18/M/Ar
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 237/233/70
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 172
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       It's about destructive habits and temptation


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    dotsDance around the Flamesdots
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    Dervish, whirling 'round the flame
    Always dancing, always the same
    No way to stop, no way to tame
    This frenzied dance around the flame

    And with the heat from flame blown wind
    Blisters that never seem to mend
    And shant untill this dance can end
    But still the flames propel the wind

    As a calling in the wind does blow
    And bids that closer is the way to go
    Body in flames, senses barely know
    that the wind has ceased to blow






    Submitted on 2006-05-05 16:39:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love it. It really gives a sense of just throwing all the burdens, weights, and responsibilities to the wind and just saying "[censored] it all". Letting go and letting yourself live and enjoy life. And hten getting so lost in the 'flame' and forgetting everything else that, quite honestly, doesn't really matter. Very refreshing. It's nice to see you found the inspiration to post again!

    ~Rae
    | Posted on 2006-05-08 00:00:00 | by losing_focus | [ Reply to This ]
      This is so cool, makes me think bout dancing naked around a bon fire. A frenzied dance, a wild dance, like the fire and the wind and the earth all mingled as one with you. Only one thing missing is water. Guess water will always be the the opposite to fire, can't put the two of them together. Ok i'm babbling now. Anyway, I really like your poem, i really wanna do that, dance... around a fire, naked now. (bdw I get the metaphor, temptation, it's the story of my life. Great write!)

    Ok. I'm away, my fire awaits! Cheers.
    * Dani

    | Posted on 2006-05-05 00:00:00 | by firefoxvixen | [ Reply to This ]



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