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    dots Submission Name: Have You Ever?dots
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    Author: lynn7
    ASL Info:    43/ St. Augustine, FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.38 - 419/288/103
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsHave You Ever?dots
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    Have you ever taken a step back
    to get a glimpse of who you are
    to only realize that there is nothing?
    Have you ever lived in a dream
    that you could not escape out of
    to only see everything that is real?
    Have you ever listened to a song
    to have spirits speak through it
    to guide you on your next turn?
    Have you ever prayed to God
    to see him answer you every time
    with a power that is beyond words?
    Have you ever felt the peace of silence
    being in the presence of the Lord
    only to hear him whisper, I love you?
    Have you ever?........ I have
    I hope I’m not alone




    Submitted on 2006-05-06 11:27:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey hi thanx for your feedback
    i like the title of this piece you wrote i guess now i asked myself that same question

    i havnt written anything in along time
    you were asking to post some older poems if you want to send me the titles ill see if i stil have them

    thanx sandman
    | Posted on 2006-12-05 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      hey hi thanx for your feedback
    i like the title of this piece you wrote i guess now i asked myself that same question

    i havnt written anything in along time
    you were asking to post some older poems if you want to send me the titles ill see if i stil have them

    thanx sandman
    | Posted on 2006-12-05 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem is a very well written poem, although it was a tad on the short side. This poem was deffinatly good, but if you added a few more lines into it, like going further into details with the different "have you ever" sections then it'd be even better. And to answer you're question, no I don't think you're alone. You might just be one of the lucky few who take time to pray or to look at life in different perspectives. keep up the good work.

    R.bayden
    | Posted on 2006-08-07 00:00:00 | by remedy bayden | [ Reply to This ]
      hi, lynn, i really love this poem, really, in its simplicity it reveals great wisdom, I am coping and keeping it, ok, I agree, very well done. But please correct, “took” to taken and “listen” to listened. Tom
    | Posted on 2006-07-30 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      I don't think you are alone here Lynn. I am sure you echo the thoughts and sentiments of many people across this world of ours.

    I enjoyed reading this - very well done.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2006-05-07 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      That was really good thats the kind of poem that really pulls people in and make them think. I know I'm not only to give complements but I really couldn't find anything wrong, though the poem didn't always rhyme it really fit anyway. And by the way no your not alone.

    James
    | Posted on 2006-07-08 00:00:00 | by James Reyna | [ Reply to This ]
      I don't believe you are alone either in what you have written, You are a very good writier and I enjoyed reading this one very much. I agree with Frank so many people across our great land have probably felt this way and some probably do feel this way. I really like this alot.

    Ladymustang
    | Posted on 2006-06-12 00:00:00 | by LadyMustang | [ Reply to This ]


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