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I'm Stronger

Author: iluvpoetry_1
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theres a crap load of family drama!! and im ova it!!

hope ya like it!
i dont noe wat 2 lable it!! so w/e tell me if u dont angry i think its a vent!

I'm Stronger

All the suffering and pain
That has haunted me from the
past to the present.

Has made me stronger beacause
I am still alive. All the insults, all the
family drama that had infected my heart and soul.

I have now finally realized I just have to let go. Of all the drama, no more pain, no more tears.

I have to make this stop. Put an end to all this depression that seems like a plague that has infected my mother, father, brother and me.

It's over
I'm stronger

Time to move on.
I need to move positive
Without all the suffering.

It's time for me to show who I am
Not the someone else, or who they want me to be.


Submitted on 2006-05-07 18:24:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  yeah this was more than a vent than a poem if u ask me. so i guess i agree with u. u sound like mary j. blidge when she put all the bullshiit behind her. just bury it
| Posted on 2006-05-10 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
  an empowerment poem thats what I am talking about! I like it ALOT! Tx for responding to my poems btw! Anyways I like it because it shows us how you grown in letting go of the past and moving on! [censored] it all whats then is whats then though it'll catch up 2 u again soon keep it up peace & stay safe...
| Posted on 2006-05-08 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ]

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