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    dots Submission Name: I'm Strongerdots
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    Author: iluvpoetry_1
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 806/439/119
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 1021
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    Bytes: 797



    Description:
       theres a crap load of family drama!! and im ova it!!

    ~akaila~
    hope ya like it!
    i dont noe wat 2 lable it!! so w/e tell me if u dont angry i think its a vent!


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    dotsI'm Strongerdots
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    All the suffering and pain
    That has haunted me from the
    past to the present.

    Has made me stronger beacause
    I am still alive. All the insults, all the
    family drama that had infected my heart and soul.

    I have now finally realized I just have to let go. Of all the drama, no more pain, no more tears.

    I have to make this stop. Put an end to all this depression that seems like a plague that has infected my mother, father, brother and me.

    It's over
    I'm stronger

    Time to move on.
    I need to move positive
    Without all the suffering.

    It's time for me to show who I am
    Not the someone else, or who they want me to be.

    ~akaila~




    Submitted on 2006-05-07 18:24:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      yeah this was more than a vent than a poem if u ask me. so i guess i agree with u. u sound like mary j. blidge when she put all the bullshiit behind her. just bury it
    | Posted on 2006-05-10 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      an empowerment poem thats what I am talking about! I like it ALOT! Tx for responding to my poems btw! Anyways I like it because it shows us how you grown in letting go of the past and moving on! [censored] it all whats then is whats then though it'll catch up 2 u again soon keep it up peace & stay safe...
    | Posted on 2006-05-08 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ]


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