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    dots Submission Name: Illusionsdots
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    Author: Infected Mind
    ASL Info:    19
    Elite Ratio:    1.57 - 14/18/25
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Rant/Misc
    Total Views: 816
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 611



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    dotsIllusionsdots
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    Illusions... what we believe becomes what we see...our fantasies can become realities...our inhibitions can be displaced... our troubles eased... we can be anybody, do anything, become the impossible... we can get lost in these dreams, bound only by the chains of reality... we must be careful not to loosen these ties that bind as once we are set free, we might not return... ignorance is bliss and yet truth, beauty... so frail and easily broken is the line that guides between our fantasies and what we have come to know as our realities... are illusions a means of escape of better yet, a means of survival?




    Submitted on 2006-05-07 18:52:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this would better if it were in stanzas
    but got your point clear
    welcome to the site i hope you enjoy it here
    | Posted on 2006-05-07 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]


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