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    dots Submission Name: Unsuredots
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    Author: Candale-Switch
    ASL Info:    23/M/WA
    Elite Ratio:    1.34 - 42/31/7
    Words: 24
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 873
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    Description:
       Self explanatory short poem. Those regrets you have being to fearful of approaching somone gorgeous when I was in elementry school.


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    An excited breath speaks no words,
    A fixed eye refuses its antagonist,
    Euphoria rushes and the pity trails
    Every time she walks by.




    Submitted on 2006-05-08 01:26:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow, she must be very appealing when she causes you to stop breathing and being you. LOL.

    Ahhh, i know it all too well...it's called LOVE. As I had commented on Dreamweaver's piece...I am engaged in a romance that has taken me far beyond this world.

    My counsel: Don't let something good pass you by and speak up...you never know if it could result in a promising future. It beats saying, "WHAT IF?"

    I have enjoyed truly.

    Love Saby~*~
    | Posted on 2006-05-31 00:00:00 | by CaramelCandy | [ Reply to This ]
      This is short and to the point. Being a female I can relate to this only the opposite. When a really sexy man walks by and you just say....oooooooh!!! haha!! But, I have learned in life to always smile and say hi to someone whenever I can. Dont ever miss out on opportunities in life such as this. You will only regret it. You may be pleasantly surprised with the results of it. And you wont know unless you try. Good poem. You capture this situation well with few words. Take care.

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2006-05-12 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      you are so true.
    | Posted on 2006-05-08 00:00:00 | by LostAlias | [ Reply to This ]
      Hah! Do we all get 'ose feelings man! Mind gets a trip back to school... =P haha, good job! see ya later.

    D-Ink
    | Posted on 2006-06-05 00:00:00 | by D-Ink | [ Reply to This ]
      Wish I had someone feel that way everytime they saw me, but alas that will never happen. Short and sweet, very nice.
    | Posted on 2006-11-07 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]


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