Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: You Suckdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: foxy lee
    ASL Info:    20 f/CT/SA
    Elite Ratio:    2.96 - 27/23/10
    Words: 186
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 692
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1206



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsYou Suckdots
    -------------------------------------------


    YOU SUCK
    YOU SUCK
    I hate you motherfucking son of a bitch
    How you take my heart
    And break it into two
    You trample it
    And crush it
    And then tell me that we're through

    What is your fucking problem
    Why can't you just be nice
    What is the problem with these guys
    Who think they're cooler than ice

    Why can't you handle shit
    Why the hell am I so nice
    Why can't you take it
    When it's staring you in the face

    Why do I always give it up
    Why do I always want you so
    When the only thing you do
    Is kill me with a blow

    All you want is "fun"
    Thats all you wanna do
    You wanna use me and abuse me
    And then you say we're through

    But you're fucking weaker than me
    I won't let you get away
    I'll give you your own medicine
    I'll make you fucking pay

    So this is what I'm gonna do
    You're the one I'm gonna ditch
    Because
    YOU SUCK
    YOU SUCK
    you motherfucking son of a bitch




    Submitted on 2006-05-08 03:50:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      umm.. i didnt like this actually. normally i wouldnt even comment but today i said that i wouldnt read anything and not comment but im also not gonna lie. i thought this was just an empty [censored] rant. there was nothing in here that even seemed emotional to me. nothing to click into someones feelings. just words.
    | Posted on 2007-04-15 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]
      At first I had to had read this standing "alittle to the side" What can I say? Left a little speachless? Well being Male? And having the same thing happen-...........But buy a female And oboivious is it, its not about sex. But not everything is not about sex, is it? Not to say things are put on the same plaine.


    No its all the same we just work diffrentley. Its the way we are wired. We all blead the same.
    The bottom line is when that neddle is pushed through and the pain pushes through. its all about #1 And making me feel better.

    I know, what can I say? I have been on both ends.

    As a favor?

    Were not all the same.


    Joshua
    | Posted on 2006-05-09 00:00:00 | by ooononotthatguy | [ Reply to This ]
      that was interesting. That's the only word i can think of right know. i know the type of guy you're talking about. the best thing to do is get out and ignore them. they'll eventually get the message. ALso not all guys are like that. I hope you know. I know alot of great guys that wouldn't do something so [censored]ty.


    ~sweetme
    | Posted on 2006-05-08 00:00:00 | by sweetme16 | [ Reply to This ]
      that was...i don't know what that was. i think it was filthy anger. please don't try to file all guys in that category. but, uh, yeah, hope you get that worked out.
    | Posted on 2006-05-08 00:00:00 | by LostAlias | [ Reply to This ]
      wow!! that was really good!!! it made me laugh just a little cuz there's a song by the band WASP and it's called "you Fu***ng suck". check it out! i'm glad to see another perspective so boldly honest!!!
    | Posted on 2006-05-08 00:00:00 | by scissorhands | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    102245

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    The Unicorn written by BlazeFlamme
    The World written by jjd
    Deep Into A World Of Despair written by DeathTone
    To the Artist written by HisNameIsNoMore
    To the Devil and Candle written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Birds of a Feather written by poetotoe
    Things They (Don't) Say written by TheStillSilence
    // Seasonal Song written by ShadowParadox
    Lilitu written by endlessgame23
    When Sirens Whisper written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Still Perfectly Flawed written by armand
    Life is moments written by Ramneet
    Adoration written by TheStillSilence
    Records I written by Raphael
    Cover written by saartha
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (1) written by endlessgame23
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (3) written by endlessgame23
    Journey written by endlessgame23
    mimicry written by expiring_touch
    Lost Inside the Race written by ForgottenGraves
    I AM THANKFUL FOR written by Ramneet
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (2) written by endlessgame23
    I, Plutarch written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Suffer The Children written by poetotoe
    Love written by saartha
    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet
    prison written by ShyOne
    Day 6 written by TheStillSilence
    Reliquary of Writ written by HisNameIsNoMore
    winners circle written by ShyOne

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry