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    dots Submission Name: To Touch YOur Lipsdots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 955
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    Description:
       I love Cory, and I love kissing him, but it seems he is not the kissing kind. And I didn't want him to turn over when he was asleep.


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    dotsTo Touch YOur Lipsdots
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    nutrients and protiens reside on your lips
    I wish I were healthier
    the memories of them warm on my own
    slowly scattered and ran away
    I whispered for them
    they slept till morning
    I watched while you dreamt
    thought about lingering there until your eyes saw my face
    thought about touching your mouth with my fingertips
    and you were mine
    but I was still afraid
    to touch perfection
    and have it turn away from me




    Submitted on 2006-05-08 12:32:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This poem makes me wish for those nutrients too! LOL! For that love that makes you feel stronger just with a light touch of the lips.

    *Sighs*
    Hey all, I'm just trying to get my reciprocation up. I'm down in the -'s pretty far. So, don't feel the need to comment on my work. I'm trying to get back into the swing of things at Elite. Think of it as a favor from me to you! Thanks for the read!
    <3BCute
    | Posted on 2006-08-24 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ]
      Very deep, and about another part of love I haven't seen before. This is a longing, a passion, a yearning. It's beautiful, but I think more can be written, since it seems kind of short. Very beautiful. Excellent.
    | Posted on 2006-05-08 00:00:00 | by Fusion | [ Reply to This ]
      this poem makes me want to look in the mirror and practice my kissing
    | Posted on 2006-05-17 00:00:00 | by urbanguttah | [ Reply to This ]
      i really think this is one of the best i have read lately, its deep and thoughtful and loving w/out that mushy s##t i hate...

    love
    xoxo
    | Posted on 2006-08-31 00:00:00 | by blu_kittin | [ Reply to This ]


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