Description: I wrote this along time ago for a friend of my in a situation that was back and forth. The would break up and make up and it caused more and more pain each time. If one had not pulled away I don't figure either on would be here today. Do you thing.
Wake up -------------------------------------------
Pain is something we at one time must
Quite often we misunderstandthe reason or we don't get what was meant.
We open our hearts again foolishly trying to mend or save what's left in a relationship so in distress, and when the past and present mesh you feel nothing but regrets.
Now who steps in? Who saves us from us?
Or are we stuck repeating the same mistakes until our times up.
Don't fall into that cycle of lust and no love. Don't be the one to always put your pride above, the purity of a touch.
Love and ego will fight tooth and nail.
You must not let your true feeling be jailed.
For I don't know of any pain worse than betrayal.
I enjoyed reading this. It held a great amount of depth and meaning to you. Personally, I could not relate, but I'm sure someone could. Overall, I enjoyed it very much and I dont really have any writing suggestions for you. Good job and continue to write. ~Caotic~
This my Friend is very well worded In the short amount of words you used you were able to capture an incredible amount of emotion The last line is the most powerful part of this poem to me as it speaks pure truth Excellent Write!!! God Bless Ron
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think Thank You Ron