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    dots Submission Name: Two on a Swingdots
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    Author: maffew
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 4/5/10
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsTwo on a Swingdots
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    Two people on a swing
    Unmatched except for gender

    What made them sit and share
    A common love from an unlikely pair

    The glasses cling together with joy
    As they imbibe delicious nectars

    Fruit gently picked and refined
    Brings forth the loveliest effect

    Togetherness and comfort
    From a bottle shared

    Notes and tones swim smoothly
    The palate their playground

    Two on a swing enjoying life
    The bottle shared is enough.




    Submitted on 2006-05-08 15:53:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is really interesting
    You left this write up to the Readers imagination what your theme is
    To me I believe you were speaking of the connection between sugar and water as in a bottle of Soda
    I enjoyed this
    And look forward to more writes from you
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-05-10 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]



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