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    dots Submission Name: Mad Worlddots
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    Author: Silenced poet
    ASL Info:    21/male/oregon
    Elite Ratio:    2.54 - 52/41/21
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 1310
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       DO NOT TELL ME MY SPELLING IS OFF, I DON'T CARE!!!!!!!! LIVE WITH IT DAMNIT!!!!!!


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    dotsMad Worlddots
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    What a mad world today,
    what a mad world that we live in.
    Everyones pain is delivered,
    and no-ones sins are forgiven.
    What a mad world for our children,
    what a mad world for us.
    Constantly living in misery,
    all our lives filled with disgust.
    Why is there so much untrust,
    Everyone judging another.
    There fearing a chnge, and simply put,
    the truth they will never uncover.
    What a mad world to bear,
    what a mad world to wander.
    Such an unruly place,
    the only escape is to slumber.
    And in the end hope fails,
    but no-one wil admit.
    That no matter what we do,
    this mad worlds all we get.




    Submitted on 2006-05-08 16:11:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      sweet poem
    | Posted on 2007-07-03 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
      Yeah I like this one and nothing will change. I think if you read this one and "Sick" back to back you would self combust lol... But its the truth no one cares about anyone else unless its juicey gossip about some star or w/e... This is the life we live in now though so all we can do is try to open some blind persons eyes to the reality of this world... GOOD WRITE and thanks for the comments...
    | Posted on 2006-05-10 00:00:00 | by Kersofmia | [ Reply to This ]
      Pretty straight up, awfully f'n depressing though, like, does any one have a gun handy? No, just kidding, I liked it, and I love the little last line things people do so you're like "OOOHHHH!!!" getting all stoked, but yah, good write.


    JetPilot
    | Posted on 2006-05-09 00:00:00 | by JetPilot | [ Reply to This ]
      HAHA...spelling sux? No ..not at all...

    I njoyed reading ur poem,
    And ur rite..
    this IS a mad world.
    TOo much pollutes it l'ready.
    Is there any hope for us, earthlings?
    I dare say there is.
    | Posted on 2006-05-09 00:00:00 | by D-Ink | [ Reply to This ]
      the title is a donnie darko song
    thats the most i can say
    the poem is too overrated.
    | Posted on 2006-05-09 00:00:00 | by orderly conduct | [ Reply to This ]
      Liked the feel of this. My favorite lines are..

    "Everyones pain is delivered,
    and no-ones sins are forgiven."

    it had me think of the pain and BS that we get on daily basis and the relief, that comes far less often ,it does seem like people in general are so quick to give misery, but a simple act of kindness or forgivness is just too much to ask for, the other line that stuck with me is,

    "That no matter what we do,
    this mad worlds all we get."

    It has a lifes a #*!%& and then you die feel to it , but yet so much the better because it is regretably the truth.

    I will not mention any spelling as you request, so, good job, you made me think and feel, as another would, which for me is why I read poetry.


    | Posted on 2006-05-08 00:00:00 | by Fey | [ Reply to This ]
      we are on the verge of self destrution
    | Posted on 2006-05-08 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]
      thats an kool poem. it is a mad world and the only excuse is slumber.
    | Posted on 2006-11-10 00:00:00 | by WD-40 | [ Reply to This ]


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