This is a great piece that definately gives cause to stop and think about our own relationships. It's about our surroundings and how we keep our company. There are things that we do or say or belive that will help us make the most of the moment. That will allow us to realize fortune in the midst of tragedy. That will help us to face our true fears while enjoying the companionship of others.
Your writing on this is very good. I'm looking forward to taking a look at more of your writing. Keep up the good work, and may the pen be with you (or the keyboard if you prefer)!
Awww this was quaint and kinda sweet. I really enjoyed it. I liked how you bet with something tangible and relevant at the ned of each line it was clever use of words. I was touched by a clip of sadness in the last verse. The first two kept my eyes open to the wonder of life and the sentimentally of my own heart.
I think sometimes we forget we are simple human animals. I think we forget our connections to the other beings on this planet. So, whenever there is a piece that helps us remember that animals can love, and we can learn from them, I'm tickled pink.
This was unique...and your title inspired me to write my poem that night...for I had many love thoughts burning in my heart at that moment...
I used to have some seahorses in my fish tank for awhile, by the way...they were always so gentle and mesmerizing as they floated softly around in their own little world...I never did catch them making love at all...and eventually they died due to a misfortunate bleaching incident (don't ask) during a tank-cleaning... but anyway, I'm rambling endlessly so I'll shut up...
wow..that was sweet and touching...and beautiful...i esecially love the part about the whales...i feel animals are usually in herds or school not for survival but for the companionship of knowing that others are there with you....another good one <3 krin
This is really sweet and touching. I've noticed you've taken more of a serious tone lately with your work and it's refreshing (not that your humorous stuff is bad, it's just nice to stretch yourself once in a while).