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the mural's face shines when you stare at it in your daisy gaze listen to the words it forms as your eyelids drag you deeper and you wake in a dead sweat with your skin a full bore heater a sip of flat ginger ale when nothing else is better and right out splat into the bucket first thing, first thing after wish there was someone else there there, but the timing is perfect for them to be out of town in a time astranged from your own where our day is their night and yesterday wasn't entirely great either when you called... a wet cold facecloth hairline to hairline gives a sense of dulling thereafter... a jackhammer outside pulses shockwaves and shockwaves to agitate your skull and the sting of a wasp noise clashing against your dual pane shatters thoughts which become focused on agony the world gyroscopically twisting it twists... it twists... and when the screeching sound of the telephone bleeds into the air you answer answer you must just to stop the havoc wreaked on your mind it's as if your hand is someone elses it moves before your eyes with terrible tracking hello hello it's someone you know your hope is raised to ask them to show but all the strength escapes you and woosied over a bucket everything you say comes out in jaw daggers and the feeling of dripping fluid and glass sharpening itself on the skin of your throat the only sound which utters out is nothing... but somehow a faint murmur... is all that comes out |
i see a painter, drunk...sitting before the canvas and upset with himself and the world and at a point of desperation. The world outside only makes it worse, the jackhammer hurts his already throbbing head...the room that he is in is dark and unfriendly...I really like this piece. It was vivid. There were emotions in this flying around and references to art and it made the entire piece work well. It was all rather lovely to read. Terribly wondeful. The line everything you say comes out silent, it reminds me again of a painter...and the painter wished to communicate through his art...but everything he is trying to express isn't working and he feels like he is getting no where. I really like this. I think I will add it as a fav. Have a lovely day JMS | Posted on 2006-05-09 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ] | I like this poem alot. I loved the line "everything you say comes out silent" very vived. Ive had a few days like this myself. IT reminds me of cleaning up. | AL | Posted on 2006-05-09 00:00:00 | by Amanda Lynn | [ Reply to This ] | |