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    dots Submission Name: Love Songsdots
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    Author: kaoriliveshere
    ASL Info:    19/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.15 - 5/10/10
    Words: 218
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 670
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1309



    Description:
       It is a poem that could be song.

    It is about loving someone so much that you protect, and support them. You just won't be the one they rely on or, the inspire in their life because it is not something thatyou can handle.


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    dotsLove Songsdots
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    Love songs always on the radio.
    Your love weighing down my heart
    To help me feel what I can't ever see.
    I don't want you to be my burden
    But this is the way it always starts.

    Don't depend on me to be your song
    When it comes time to sing for the crowd.
    I can be the stage you stand on,
    But be careful because I have trap doors.

    I will not tell you when to stop singing.
    That is something you will have to determine.

    Love songs always on the radio.
    Your love weighing down my heart
    To help me feel what I can't ever see.
    I don't want you to be my burden
    But this is the way it always starts.

    Backstage I won't be another of your fans.
    I won't be the woman behind this camera
    Telling you you look more beautiful every day.
    I will be the bodyguard protecting you.

    When the crowd gets too large to handle
    Let me be the force to make it small again.

    Love songs always on the radio.
    Your love weighing down my heart
    To help me feel what I can't ever see.
    I don't want you to be my burden
    But this is the way it always starts.





    Submitted on 2006-05-09 10:05:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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