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    dots Submission Name: Color my songdots
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    Author: goveiac
    ASL Info:    30/M/Toronto
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 57/71/61
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Passion
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    dotsColor my songdots
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    The next time you listen to your favorite song, try to hear it in technicolor.
    Let the greenish purple vibes set in and to the lyrics try not to bother.
    Feel that meal glide across your ears and down into the brain.
    Taste it for the richest tunes but taste it all the same.

    It becomes yellow sun that warms the soul and fills you up with song.
    A rolling red with encores met and a bluebird to sing along.

    An earthy brown with cool wide hugs and dances that keep you moving.
    A chance to sing along with pink and a grey that keeps us grooving.

    A real orange reprieve in deep sleep that was hasty in its own revival.
    A blanket for you and I to share and this blanket becomes our survival.





    Submitted on 2006-05-09 14:09:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is fantastical. Yeah I know not a real word, but this is beyond real words for me. Its not the best poem I have read, but it isn't because this is lacking. It is however the most original I have ever read. As soon as I read the first line I take it to heart, and begin to think, how would I feel about my favorite song, if I were to listen in technicolor. My fav song by the way is by the late great Nirvana. I am already picturing a rainbow when I hear the first chord. My favorite part was the first stanza. And my fav part of that was the last line. You've got something and I think this poem is perfect.

    Cheerio!
    | Posted on 2006-05-18 00:00:00 | by groovycay | [ Reply to This ]
      kickass... ive been looking for like an hour for something to really get me. this finally did after like 50 poems full of SHIT WE HAVE ALL HEARD BEFORE. congrats on being interesting and even more for writing something meaningful as opposed to wasting space.
    | Posted on 2006-05-12 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]
      Music and color and the way things sound...perfect matches. Music is life. By looking all around us we can see the music of life. Be it a quiet whisper of the wind or the roar of the cafe during lunch, music is all around us.
    | Posted on 2006-05-10 00:00:00 | by orange | [ Reply to This ]
      I love music and I love colors and in this poem you toke my favorite things and put them together. I like the part where you say "An earthy brown with cool wide hugs and dances that keep you moving.
    A chance to sing along with pink and a grey that keeps us grooving." Because I love dancing more than anything in The Whole WORLD!!! But the colors always seem to go to with the mood of what you're talking about and that's really good.
    Good Job

    ~Nique~
    | Posted on 2006-05-09 00:00:00 | by nique | [ Reply to This ]
      this is really cool the way you take music into depth but it seems like your high or trippin on something! lol! not that anything is wrong with that! this is really sweet! it [censored]in rocks my socks!!! LOL
    | Posted on 2006-05-09 00:00:00 | by suicidalacts72 | [ Reply to This ]



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