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    dots Submission Name: Discretiondots
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    Author: gargleafg
    ASL Info:    18/M
    Elite Ratio:    5.73 - 51/42/26
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 142
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 549



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    Discretion gets the best of me--Idiot or smart?
    It’s the discretion that tears the heart--
    Necessary evil.
    An unaccepted generalization.
    The wailing, the hissing, the annoyance.
    Why is it all taboo?
    Who’s to say?
    Youth is youth,
    It’s the stages that vary.
    Nothing inherently illicit.
    More innocent than anything.
    I’ve learned it more than once.
    Life strains,
    I move on.
    But it stays,
    Corrupting my mind,
    Slowly, slowly coercing insanity.




    Submitted on 2006-05-09 15:52:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Going insane from your own life, thats what i got , a topic most can relate to. Maybe that wasnt what you were going for. Do tell if it was not, beautiful thinkg about poetry is everyone connects it to there own life and maybe never truely get what the poet was trying to get across...
    thirst_4_serenity
    | Posted on 2006-05-09 00:00:00 | by Thirst4Serenity | [ Reply to This ]
      Ahhh...youth and innocence? Not really knowing if choices and thoughts and decisions are right or just emotion, or perhaps blind optimism/wisdom?
    I feel that you want to elicit a sense of strength and confidence in your ability to "move forward" in a tumultuous place (life), but that you have a tiny voice nagging at you from deep within that constantly questions and drives you to a point where you almost feel insane. I liked the piece. I think there's a lot going on, and there is a lot of hidden messages, and dual (multiple even) meanings...
    great job, I'll be back for more!
    Annie Hodgkiss
    | Posted on 2006-05-09 00:00:00 | by Anniehodgkiss | [ Reply to This ]



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