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    dots Submission Name: GOD LOVESdots
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    Author: Lavender
    ASL Info:    20/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 101/125/59
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsGOD LOVESdots
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    Every leaf has a branch,
    Every branch has a stem,
    Every stem is connected to the ground.
    The ground is God
    And the leaves are the people;
    They're all connected somehow.
    The leaves on the ground that are dry and crumpled
    Are people whose lives have gone wrong.
    But since they're on the ground,
    You can tell God still loves them.
    He'll never let them go.
    He'll never let anyone go.
    The blossoms on the branches
    Are the saints in heaven,
    And the small leaves on the branches
    Are the little children whom he loves.
    The buds on the branches
    Are the people who are saintly,
    And the big leaves on the branches
    Are the men and women who follow his law.




    Submitted on 2006-05-10 08:53:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      god loves i hate!
    | Posted on 2006-05-10 00:00:00 | by suicidalacts72 | [ Reply to This ]
      a nice ode, noone can really give any criticism on religious peices because religion is so personal, but if this is how you really feel than good job expressing it
    | Posted on 2006-05-10 00:00:00 | by brokenmuse | [ Reply to This ]


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