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    dots Submission Name: Scars~5/23/04~10:59pmdots
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    Author: trustnomore31
    ASL Info:    18/F/Georgia
    Elite Ratio:    1.42 - 26/11/32
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsScars~5/23/04~10:59pmdots
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    Scars are painful reminders of the past
    Make me remember that i'll never last
    Scars are the truth we try to hide
    Make me realize that i'll never confide
    Scars are the problems we all cover up
    Make me remember that i've had enough
    Scars are the reason i'll NEVER TRUST you
    Make me realize you were NEVER TRUE




    Submitted on 2006-05-10 12:14:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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