To me,
True love is colorblind.
Doesn't matter that one is Black, White, Hispanic, or Asian.
When two lovers kiss,
I only see one unity,
Not skin color.
Just the passion dripping on each others lips.
this was a really good poem! but I think you may have been able to achieve more depth and meaning if you went into more detail. for example use parts of your lines to make into a stanza, ie. 1 stanza about racial love ect, one about the colourblindness of it. just an idea for the future. nice work though/
Hey you....this was short, sweet and to the point. I loved it......Alot. THe whole multiracial relationships is a big problem for a lot of people. But since way back then it has calmed down a little you know? It just kills me that people are like that you know it sucks. I totally agree and feel the same way as you did in this poem. I once was in a long realtionship with a black guy and I am mexican and everyone was so critical to it......it sucks that people are so predjudice. Well anyways great write its going on my faves!!! Take care Thomas.
~Christina
ps. I just notice I kept saying suck alot. I am so stupid. lol bye
Wow short sweet and right to the point! Even your lines were filled with passion! I absolutley loved it and agree totally! Keep it up, def one of my faves
I agree with you. This was very good. I have a white bf, and we are so in love. When we go out, people stare and we are like so what. We don't see what others see, because our love rises above the ignorance of others. This was thought provoking and very well written. Maybe you can add more to this one day. Overall, very good.
Submission Name: Colorblind
