Description: It's about an X that I dated awhile back... we were together for the time lenght mentioned... ect... I need help ending it in a more complete fashion...! Help! Help!
6 months, 7 days, 9 hours and 36 minutes -------------------------------------------
A million hellos
A thousand good-byes
With hugs and kisses
Smiles and sighs
These were the good times
Times of love
Times of happiness
Times to be proud of
Times generally change
As seasons tend to
But forever I promise
To remember you
For 6 months, you held my heart
For 7 days, you veiwed my soul
For 9 hours, I let you love me
And for 36 minutes, I felt whole
For 6 months, you held my heart For 7 days, you veiwed my soul For 9 hours, I let you love me And for 36 minutes, I felt whole
till them last seconds you'd made me happy
or
down to the last second I was happy for that my love will not part
paart rhymes with heart at the top so i umm made it rhyme. see with my knowledge and skills of this, I may not be right lol sweet and touchie poem hope the next time you see him allow him to read this peace
I like the ending. Although you could put in something about seconds. I'm not sure how else you could end it. I like. If me and my beau ever break, this will prob. be an idea for a poem.
Submission Name: 6 months, 7 days, 9 hours and 36 minutes
