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    dots Submission Name: Clown Facedots
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    Author: precious_poetry
    ASL Info:    19 F TN
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 137/145/67
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 714
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    Description:
       I have never written a comedy type poem before. Hope my first one at least brings a smile to your face.


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    dotsClown Facedots
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    Polka-dots and face paint,
    Pulling coins out of ears,
    Making kids cry and faint,
    Causing chaos through the years.

    Your big red nose and wig,
    The huge shoes on your feet,
    Making noises like a pig,
    When you take a seat.

    Balloon animals and juggling plates,
    Squirting people with that flower,
    Cursing when you fall on your skates,
    Making all the little ones cower.

    All you clowns at parties today,
    Keep in mind you are suppose to be funny,
    Don't scare the kids away,
    Keep your shows light and sunny!




    Submitted on 2006-05-11 07:04:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I agree...clowns are SCARY CREATURES! and it did bring a smile to my face because I am picturing mini me crying incontrollably at my friends 5th bday party... like I said, clownd scare me!
    | Posted on 2006-05-12 00:00:00 | by orange | [ Reply to This ]
      nice... tell those clowns! i totally agree, clowns are creepier than funny
    | Posted on 2006-05-11 00:00:00 | by Infected Mind | [ Reply to This ]


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