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    dots Submission Name: Counselor For Too Longdots
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    Author: precious_poetry
    ASL Info:    19 F TN
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 137/145/67
    Words: 191
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 694
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    Description:
       Yes, my family makes me crazy. I love them dearly, but I may be bald before I know it. I hope I don't seem mean with these words. The youngest of three sisters is the one that they seek for advice, somethings wrong when they want something from someone with much less life experience.


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    dotsCounselor For Too Longdots
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    You all make me crazy!
    With the drama and crying,
    I can't get out of the middle,
    When you bitches just keep prying!

    Fighting over the little things,
    Trying to be better than the other,
    I can't get a good night's sleep,
    With all the thoughts that smother.

    Only you can solve your problems,
    I can only try to understand,
    Taking sides isn't what I want,
    So I can't lend a helping hand.

    Midnight isn't the best time,
    To come knocking at my door,
    When you break up with your beau,
    You make being a sister a chore.

    I love you all with all I have,
    But I am grown and have a life,
    I need to let you settle it all,
    And try to go back to being a wife.

    I can't let you drive me nuts,
    My husband needs me to be sane,
    When I married and moved away,
    I thought I would be rid of your games.

    Try to understand when I tell you,
    I will always lend an ear,
    But I can't be your counselor,
    Every time you shed a tear.




    Submitted on 2006-05-11 07:30:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow, Can I save this to my jumpdrive and keep it so when I'm gone I can send it to them cause they are way too attached? Only I'm the oldest, so it'll be slightly different. But I can totally see me needing this in a couple of years. Needless to say...twas good.
    | Posted on 2006-05-12 00:00:00 | by orange | [ Reply to This ]
      great piece of writing i think all families make each other crazy throughout life
    some say its because they care or sometimes they care to nuch and get over protective
    anywaz great thought

    sandman
    | Posted on 2006-05-11 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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