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    dots Submission Name: Because of Your Habit...dots
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    Author: precious_poetry
    ASL Info:    19 F TN
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 137/145/67
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       This is about someone I love, but I can't confront her. Things are scary for my family and I because of her habit.


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    dotsBecause of Your Habit...dots
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    All of my life, I knew how you were,
    Staying stoned and denying the world.
    Your attitude towards love and respect,
    Are distorted, twisted, and curled.

    Your selfish ways damage your family,
    Because of your habit, your children suffer.
    Your body is wounded inside and out,
    And the drugs make you no tougher.

    No independence is the cause of your losses,
    Staying happy is the obstacle you face.
    Quit popping the pills and using dope,
    Or another woman will take your place.

    You are killing yourself for the temporary relief,
    But if you would just open your eyes,
    You would see happiness lives with you,
    Inside yours, and your children's lives.

    Killing the pain isn't what you need,
    Confront, conquer, get rid of your strife
    Life doesn't end when you lose what you have,
    Its when your habit takes your life.




    Submitted on 2006-05-11 09:24:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This poem must of been tough to write but it's awesome and you get your point across clearly the ryming could use a lilttle work but who am I to judge I can't ryme either :P..anyways the poem was deeply touching and made me quite emotional when I read it keep up the good work

    Crys
    | Posted on 2006-05-11 00:00:00 | by Hip-Hop Honey | [ Reply to This ]
      Love the frank honesty of this poem many times poets such as myself try to make such a fluent sounding poem we forget the point and just pray for you family member and love her. Love goes alot farther than worry.

    much love
    James
    | Posted on 2006-07-11 00:00:00 | by James Reyna | [ Reply to This ]


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