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Happy Family?

Author: nuttyginna
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Words: 80
Class/Type: Poetry /Death
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I was just thinking one night about stuff (as you do) and this poem formed in my head. Say whatever you want about it, comments, insults, whatever. Hope you liked it though!

Happy Family?

'Have you seen mummy?'
A boy asks in fear.
'I'm next to you' said mummy
To the boy in his ear.
The boy turns around,
gives mummy a cuddle,
He's soaking wet
did he fall in a puccle?
A little girl walks over,
daddy holding her hand.
They smile at each other,
while on the pavement they stand.
Is this a happy family,
when they go home to bed?
I cannot tell you,
as they are all dead.

Submitted on 2006-05-11 11:28:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this is an odd, but intreaging poem. My only critique is you spelled puddle wrong, oh well ^_^ !!!!
Good job !!!
| Posted on 2006-05-11 00:00:00 | by Necromi | [ Reply to This ]
  I like it, Even though its pretty wierd. Can ghosts get wet? I don't really care. I like stuff abou ghosts and magic and stuff.
| Posted on 2006-05-11 00:00:00 | by Lizzy B | [ Reply to This ]

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