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The Memory


Author: iluvpoetry_1
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2cd hour was horrible! i dunt really like it!! but here it is!
~akaila~
dinner is ready!!


The Memory



I am going back to that place
The place where the wounds
are beginning to peal from my heart

I can faintly see the memory of my past. The one that I forever want to forget.

I hate that feeling that brings this stinging sensation into the bottom of my heart.

I don't want to remember this pain anymore. I want to forget.

It needs to end
And never return

In my mind again.

~akaila evonne~




Submitted on 2006-05-11 21:37:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I love this and it made me so sad, but strangely happy at the same time. Sad because you feel this way, happy because I'm not the only one.
Troy did give you great advice though.
Very nice write!

*tox8
| Posted on 2006-05-28 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ]
  a lot of the time reading ur stuff is like reading the same thing over and over again. but i can't tell u that it's all gonna be ok if u just keep wallowing in ur own pain and self pity. get up and move on
| Posted on 2006-05-18 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
  Sometimes it's so hard to erase memories that you'd rather not have... but I hope for you to have a blessed peace in your heart and in your life. God bless!

-p1
| Posted on 2006-05-12 00:00:00 | by psycho_1 | [ Reply to This ]


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