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    dots Submission Name: lifes a bitchdots
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    Author: amy_lee_is_sexy
    Elite Ratio:    0.95 - 1/6/8
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    mentals wounds never heal as we try to conceal there is too much hurt and pain we end up learning memories never fade. Cutting ours selves making the wounds deep show how much u hurt us on the inside even though we dead to the world. of course u'll have ur friends that scream and yell but do they know how u really feel. Wounds my heal but the scares will tell of stories of hell




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      it doesnt quite flow right, but the poem is powerful. its just hard to follow a bit. try putting it in stanzas. other than that it is awesome
    | Posted on 2006-05-12 00:00:00 | by trustnomore31 | [ Reply to This ]

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