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    dots Submission Name: Endearmentdots
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    Author: Linkins_knot
    ASL Info:    14/Male/Behind a Computer
    Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 20/46/19
    Words: 265
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 105
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1680



    Description:
       im writing this with a help of a friend, plus im thinking of my girlfriend as well...


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    dotsEndearmentdots
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    There was something missing in my heart
    All of life began to depart
    My hate began to go away
    I’m aimed to the right way
    My broken heart, my broken soul
    You’re the one that filled it with gold

    I stare into your eyes
    I no longer wish to die
    I feel like I can live
    I feel I can survive
    I’m meaning this, truth
    You really make life soothe

    The hugs are enjoyment
    Life for me is no longer a disappointment
    I can live happily now
    Without myself feeling pound to the ground
    Your touch is purity
    Your nickname should be serenity

    I’m lingered to the right path
    Leaded away from bringing that world wrath
    I wanted to create destruction and destroy the hated
    No longer portrayed or demonstrated
    I’m still vigorous and hasty no doubt
    I no longer want the hated to cry and shout

    The kiss is daring, exhilarating
    Only if I could keep on breathing
    The magic clears the taintness
    I feel no longer heartless
    The warmth cleanses the nightmares
    They no longer plan dares

    I’m beginning to built trust
    It is not because of your lust
    You helped me seize my fears
    My eyes stopped growing tears
    You’re my prosthetics, to help me
    I’m happy I have found thee

    I’m in your debt
    I’m something you won’t regret
    I will protect you as you have protected me
    And that point will always be
    I command myself to save you from death
    Even if it brings me to my last breath…”




    Submitted on 2006-05-12 00:19:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is a very good poem. Yeah...thats all I had to say.
    | Posted on 2007-06-12 00:00:00 | by Sushmister | [ Reply to This ]
      hey u!!! see i told u id read it!!! ur rite it is pretty long but its good!! im glad u found somebdoy that makes u happy and u feel like u can move on!!!
    ~akaila~
    | Posted on 2006-05-26 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]



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